I am hating my essay the more I read it :(

<p>I have one more application to finish and I was thinking of turning in the essay I wrote for common app. I problem is, the more I read it, the more I get sick of it and the more I dislike my essay. I can't really do anything about my common app now, but I feel regret becuase I feel like I could have written 100x better. ugh
Can someone please read my essay and tell me if its fine for Columbia or not?
Thanks so much</p>

<p>I’ll read it. All my apps are turned in. :)</p>

<p>Did you get it?</p>

<p>Here’s a solution: DON’T READ IT! Don’t even think about it. Go out for a jog or study for midterms or something. It would help your mind out. :slight_smile:
However, if you really want to know, you can send it to me. However, don’t expect me to be lenient with my comments.</p>

<p>Yep, I got it. haha.</p>

<p>omg I’ve been having the exact same problem ALL DAY. I don’t know what I’m going to do. And I love my essay when I wrote it ):</p>

<p>I’ve noticed that after reading my essay several times over, the words begin to just mesh together and lose meaning; I can no longer process the overall message I tried to convey when writing it. I just see a bunch of sentences and paragraphs, and say to myself, “hmm… maybe I should have phrased this differently,” every ten seconds or so.</p>

<p>me too! I always get this feeling of detachment w/ whatever I write after a while =.=</p>

<p>yeah im glad im not the only one! I just stopped looking at it cause its all done and i cant do anything about it now. When I wrote it, I thought it was so great! and now I think its like so bleh and cliche!</p>

<p>I can, just PM it to me.</p>

<p>My friend got accepted into Columbia ED (if that establishes sort of credibility?).</p>