My essay sucks

<p>I really think that my essay has gotten to a point where it shows such a specific thing about me that it's almost pointless- there's so much more to me than what's in this essay, and I'm not sure how else I can convey it (especially since I don't have many experiences to talk about- this is the only one I could actually put together). I'm sure colleges could get to know more about me in the additional essays, but not all colleges accept them (e.g., Columbia). Any input? Did anyone submit additional essays to Columbia? Would anyone be willing to read my essays?</p>

<p>oh god no one read this thread. it does suck - damnit how will i get this garbage out of my skull. i feel contiminated with stupid words!</p>

<p>I am a parent and I am happy to read your essay and give you suggestions and reactions from an adult perspective. Just pm me.</p>

<p>send it over, and stop having a cow!</p>

<p>u better not have a cow. I speak on behalf of all vegetarians! :D</p>