<p>hi, thanks for clicking on the thread! I have already written two essays--both were scrapped. I would love it if someone wanted to look over my latest and critique the topic, and give their opinion on whether I should keep it or not. Thanks again!</p>
<p>i can read if you want</p>
<p>i’ll read</p>
<p>Hope you don’t have any sentences like these in your essay 
<a href=“10 Sentences To Avoid In Your College Essay”>http://www.buzzfeed.com/story2college/10-cute-kitten-college-essay-clichas-1110y</a></p>