<p>ill read it, pm it over</p>
<p>haha I'll actually critque it if you still want to send it</p>
<p>You can send it to me if you wish. I've got a surprisingly light work load this weekend and I'm looking for something to do. I'll respond with feedback, cross my heart. I'm a pretty good editor; I'm Editor in Chief of my school newspaper so I have a lot of practice giving feedback on drafts.</p>
<p>Full Disclosure: I am applying these year. However, I consider myself a good enough writer that I'm not tempted to skim off someone else's essays. xD I have finished my Common Application essay completely. Other colleges I am applying to are Amherst, Mount Holyoke, UVA, William & Mary, Smith, Grinnell, Kenyon and Swarthmore. It's up to you.</p>
<p>Oh my God, I would LOVE to read it... even if you've already sent it in, I would just absolutely LOVE it because it sounds amazing! I am a 1st year college student, BTW, so I have a lot of experience with these essays unfortunately, lol.</p>
<p>This sounds like a great essay.
I would love to read it</p>
<p>Send it! I am not applying, already in college. Good luck</p>
<p>Feel like an idiot, I responded to a post from Sept 26, duh!</p>
<p>As did I and the rest of the people.
lol :)</p>
<p>pm me please
hope i can make you cry again</p>
<p>i laugh at the people still trying to read this essay. lol</p>
<p>lol tenchar</p>
<p>pm me it ill be happy to read</p>
<p>woha. I really want to read/help.
Pm if you'd like some good feedback :)</p>
<p>i'd love to read it if you PM me. would you read mine?</p>
<p>I'd love to read and critique it.</p>
<p>I would love to read/critique it :)</p>
<p>this sounds amazing - PM me! i will be glad to read/critique it</p>
<p>i can read it!</p>
<p>Sounds emotional and deep! i'd love to read! PM me if you want.</p>
<p>i want to read it very much</p>