I don't like my essay at all.

<p>Hi everyone, I really have no idea which Common App topic to choose so I tried 'topic of my choice'. I cooked up something on 'my ideal education', but I think it's really bad. Anyone care to read it?</p>

<p>I'm still in the experimenting stage, so all harsh criticisms are welcome. Thank you!</p>

<p>PM it to me and I swear I won't steal it ;)
Gotta warn u...i'm brutally honest...</p>