<p>Ok, I have written my college personal essay. Its about 760 words, but in terms of certain colleges and the UC's and depending on the prompts, this essay can be changed and molded to fit any prompt. I really want someone to read it!!!!!!! I have no clue if it is a good essay or not. It is written from my heart, but I am not sure if it is what admissions peopel expect. Its about how my drive to be a great student has taken away from my family relationships. ITS NOT BORING I PROMISE......</p>
<p>LEAVE YOUR EMIAL FOR ME....I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE SOMEONE GIVING IT A LOOK</p>
<p>THANKS</p>