I need criticism/critiques on my Ivy commonapp essay

College Essays
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<p>anyone up for the task?</p>

2

<p>Anyone? 10</p>

3

<p>sure! pm it to me</p>

4

<p>I would not mind taking the task, just PM me. I will also have my brother read it over. He is an admissions officer for Cornell University.</p>

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<p>me .</p>

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<p>I can help!</p>

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<p>I would, but I am a 2015er myself. If you don’t feel comfortable sending, then I won’t mind. :)</p>

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<p>i’m down =)
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