I'm not sure if I'm going to submit this as my Common App essay...

<p>I have written an essay that I might submit as my Common App essay. Would anyone (current college students and ones who have been on the board for a long time) be willing to read, critique, and give me advice on my essay and whether or not I should use it?</p>

<p>Cornell is one of my very top choices, so any advice from actual Cornell students would be greatly appreciated. :)</p>

<p>ill read it. im currently a junior at cornell. PM it over</p>

<p>Thank you! May I email it to you instead? I feel it’s a more secure way of sending something as important as a college essay. :P</p>