<p>Ok. I have no personal essay for the common app. I have two paragraphs, from two different possible essays. My problem is, I don't know how to elaborate on them to make them essays, or even if they're worthy essay topics at all. And I don't know which one to choose.And I have about three days to finish one of them... could anyone read them, and critique them, to give me an idea of which topic has more going for it?</p>
<p>do you want to swap essays? I need help as well!</p>
<p>okay, I’ll pm mines over</p>
<p>I’ll do it. :]</p>
<p>:D thank you!</p>