I wrote my Common App Essays and my College Coach told me to change them before she sees me again. But she never told me what I should change. She’s coming in 40 minutes and I still haven’t figured out what I can change.
Please Help, I CAN PM the essays.
But since you have a college coach, you shouldn’t need other people, like a pre-coach coach . Tell the coach you need specific pointers. Isn’t that what you pay the coach for? When I critique a student I usually have pointers like don’t say doing “something” in a sentence, make it specific to put the reader in your shoes. Or tell if a section has to be less cliche and more in your own words.