I think it's great......so you wanna critique?( College Students/Parents )

<p>I think it's a pretty sweet essay but of course, I'm biased. That's where you come in....read and critique please...it's for Questbridge....</p>

<p>P.S.- this is eerily like Craig's list lmao</p>

<p>I can look at it. PM me if you like:)</p>

<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

<p>I'll read it :)</p>

<p>Bump- really don't feel comfortable sending my essays to peers..........any admitted college students or parents who would like to read? ( It might make your day!)</p>

<p>m2!!!!!!!!</p>

<p>No offense but I find it kind of odd that you "don't feel comfortable" sending it to high school students. Just because we're your same age doesn't mean we're out to get you. ^_^</p>

<p>If you decide to change your mind, I'd be willing to give some feedback. PM or send to JadeFire19 @ gmail.com</p>

<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

<p>can i take a look?</p>

<p>I'll take a look but be warned that I'm harsh :)</p>

<p>Ill take a look if you want.</p>