I want colleges to judge me by the content of my character...

College Essays
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<p>... But I'm worried that I chose an essay topic that is much too general. I've heard feedback that it's well-written, but I can't shake the feeling that I should have focused more on "fighting adversity". Can someone please give it a look and help me out? Thanks!</p>

<p>PS Sorry about the painfully lame thread title</p>

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<p>what’s your topic?</p>

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<p>I can give it a read if you’d like :)</p>

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<p>My topic is basically “standing at a crossroads” between Eastern and Western culture (I’m half-Iranian). It goes more in-depth but that’s the gist of it</p>