I wrote about my first boyfriend. bad?

College Essays
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<p>PM if you want to critique the hell out of it and/or tell me to scrap it. (or keep!)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too</p>

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<p>I don’t think the topic is bad. In fact, if your first boyfriend and how you grew from that relationship is what you wrote about, I believe the admissions officers will find it refreshing as compared to the many essays about foreign trips, extra curriculars etc. no that those can’t show insight Into a persons life, but this is something less common :)</p>

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<p>Awh, I’m glad you think that. That’s what it basically is. I don’t think it’s bad, but then again I need objective opinions… If I get positive feedback here I think I’ll ask my teachers, etc. :)</p>