<p>ToK is a cake course at many schools, but it is NOT a cake subject. By that I mean a lot of schools (certainly not at mine) it is really easy to get an A in the class, but the material is still very difficult for a lot of students. You have to have a certain kind of mine to like ToK or really be good at it and those are rare. I guess for that reason a lot schools make the class pretty easy or something, I dunno but I have heard that before. If your son thinks ToK is a cake class he may have that kind of mind, but it may just be the way ToK is taught. At my school, me and a couple other guys would sit around antsy all day waiting for ToK, and I am not kidding. That was probably the coolest class I've ever taken. Most people.... didn't agree with us to say the least. So I guess it really depends on the teacher and how he teaches and how in depth he goes. If your teacher isn't very concrete but goes very deep then your never going to get it, I don't care how smart you are. If your teacher goes very deep and ties it into concrete examples then your lucky, and if he can teach you how to do that then you will score very well on your essay because that is what they look for. I was one of the lucky ones and had a FANTASTIC teacher. I would say the majority of ToK teachers aren't like either of those though, they are the ones that make ToK a 'cake class.'</p>
<p>The ToK essay is hard because it is. Thats really all there is to it. The concepts are tough to grasp. The questions are deep. The grading is arbitrary. And even if you can manage to come up with some brilliant insight into the subject, finding concrete examples and explaining them well is ridiculous. You have to maintain focus and continually tie an often abstract question or idea back into reality. Thats what gets you top scores. If you can take artificial intelligence, knowledge through religion, logical constructs in language, groupthink, etc relate it back to some larger question, and then tie it into the everyday world so much so that a middle schooler could get it you will get a good score, but that is very hard to do.</p>
<p>Most of the time a ToK paper had only a few of the above qualifications. Typically I have seen two types more than any other. a. the student does understand the subject, makes insight, but goes on rants and digressions everywhere (which is extremely easy to without realizing it), and can't tie it into the everyday world. The other is someone who doesn't really get it, and just sounds convoluted and confused, or overly simple.</p>
<p>The worst part is, it is easy to do that kind of stuff without realizing it and think you have a fantastic paper. Lord knows how many times I got my paper back, one that I thougth was amazing, with a fat D or C- on the front of it, and red ink everywhere. You have to realize that you are not the one grading the paper, and just because you follow your logic doesn't mean your grader will. Thats a big problem, having it go over the graders head because you didn't explain it well enough. Point's need to be made and reinforced with meticulous detail without becoming redundant.</p>
<p>Another big problem is hypothetical situations. Tell your son to avoid these like the plague!!! Every ToK student thinks they have a fantastic idea, and explains their idea by saying "if person X had idea Y and encountered person...." Contaray to popular belief, that is NOT a concrete example, its an abstract example and it really means nothing. Examples need to be taken from the other 'groups' of IB, that is history, english, math, science etc. It works very well to cite moments in history when some logical fallacy had some effect, or talk about implications of proofs in mathematics, or the use of art in the English language to affect public opinion. Find a specific proof (the square root of two is irrational, for example) or a specific historical example, or a specific text and character and tie your point, your expansion or addition to the ideas of ToK, and bring it into reality while tieing it back into the question through an example like that.</p>
<p>thats whats hard. its very hard. very very very very very hard. and it takes a lot of practice to learn how to do well.I dont mean to scare you off, I love ToK, it was probably my favorite class in high school. And I don't mean to sound pompous or arrogant about it either. These are all things I learned from making those very mistakes and having my grades suffer because of them, and from reading other kids papers who got better or worse grades. </p>
<p>I guess that kind of turned more into advice about how to write a good ToK paper and thats not really what you asked for, but thats also kind of why the ToK paper is hard. For a lot of people it isn't hard to write, just hard to do well on, does that make sense? You can think you did fantastic but you very well may get a terrible score. I have lots of advice and opinions regarding IB, especially concerning ToK and the classes I am fimilair with (none of those is buisiness, so I can't really help you out there). If you want to know anything more, just PM me or let me know right here and future IBers can see it.</p>
<p>ps. when I say you, I am of course referring to your son, or whomever else is in IB going through this</p>
<p>pps. my bad BGjeez! I usually try to watch my gender associations on here, I've made that mistake too many times, lol.</p>