<p>...please post here. Ill PM ya. I dont care who would like to read it cause its pretty personal, just as long as you have good advice for me (I think thats the key). Id prefer something educated in the critique but its all good (general feelings, likes, dislikes, etc.) in my opinion.</p>
<p>The essay is in response to the "evaluate an experience and its impact on you" fashion and i wrote it about my experiences in israel, so Id guess any fellow jews in the house would be of good help, but i wouldnt want it limited to those. Thanks!</p>