<p>I just finished the rough draft to my Common App "long essay". If anyone would be willing to read my essay and tell me if they thing the theme and coherence of my essay is good, I would be willing to read your essay and tell you what I think about it.</p>
<p>*If you see any major grammar mistakes tell me because I haven't checked over the grammar yet.
* I'll send it to you via PM</p>
<p>thanks</p>