<p>Would someone read my essay?</p>
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<p>Thanks for the advice .</p>
<p>jkeels2013 - I commend you for working on getting a head start by working on your essay during the summer. MommaJ makes a good point about asking asking a respected poster to read your essay. Additionally, you can ask an English teacher that you like to read your essay once school begins. My daughter worked with her SAT tutor on her essays and the essays were not going well. She then met with an English teacher after school who really gave her good suggestions for changes. The advice was excellent and free.</p>