In need of one or more kind soul(s) to read my supp essay

<p>Supplemental essay for a mystery college you will soon learn of if you are kind enough to volunteer to read it. Oooh, sounds intriguing, does it not? ;) Anyway, not really sure how good it is. I'm a little worried I was a little to informal in places, but I'm hoping that differentiates me from the thousands of others applying. So, any takers willing to read to read my essay?</p>

<p>sure, send it over</p>

<p>i dont mind reading it and possibly even suggesting some changes</p>

<p>Thanks guys! I’ll PM it over right now.</p>

<p>send it. can u read mine too?</p>

<p>Yep, just PMed you.</p>