<p>Hello,</p>
<p>I only have a few hours to finish up this essay, :) and was wondering if anybody'd like to review it? I know the ending needs some work...Please let me know if the nature of the essay is too subtle or not.</p>
<p>I am counting on you guys!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Any takers? My gosh, I need some serious input on a better conclusion. I'm supposed to link the story to how it positively impacted me, and it's pretty tough.</p>
<p>i could help you. pm me ill be up till midnight</p>
<p>Awesome, PM sent. I'll put on a pot of coffee for all the all-nighters like me. :D</p>