Anyone willing to read my essay?

<p>Prompt: Describe someone who influenced your life and describe that influence.</p>

<p>It's not quite finished, as I pretty much suck at endings lol. So most importantly, I need some advice on how to close it :)</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>I just really need some feedback :&lt;/p>

<p>I’d be more than happy to take a look! PM it to me, don’t post it here.</p>

<p>Sure! PM it. :)</p>

<p>I can read it if you’d like. :)</p>

<p>^ needed bump?</p>

<p>i will be happy to read it, alexmitu.
PM it to me</p>