<p>I just completed the first draft of my essay (literally 2 minutes ago). I included a photo of the subject on the second page. The essay is pretty short, only a page. Will someone please read it and give me their comments? And tell me whether or not I should leave the photo attached?</p>
<p>Keep in mind, I've done no editing so far. So yes, it's a little messy right now. But is it salvageable? haha</p>
<p>So... anyone want to let me email it to you? I don't think a PM will work with a photo</p>
<p>Thanks!!</p>