<p>hey, guys, so i really need advice/feedback on my partially written essay. i haven't put that much time in it yet, more of a stream of consciousness thing i had late one night :P but i'm really worried about my inability to 'show' rather than 'tell'. & i need to know if my topic/writing is good or if i'm just being cliche, which i would hate :(</p>
<p>don't be tooo harsh (:</p>
<p>no class of 2010-ers please!</p>
<p>bump! any one?</p>
<p>I’ll help, but I’m a 2010er. I have no intention of stealing your essay—I have my own personal ideas.</p>
<p>If you send it to me I’ll critique it. Just send the prompt along with it</p>
<p>You can send it to me. I would be happy to critique it.</p>
<p>thanks, guys. any other takers?</p>
<p>Pleaseee :)</p>
<p><em>sigh</em> bump!</p>
<p>bump of severe desperation!!!</p>
<p>i’ll read it. pm it to me</p>
<p>send me your essay and i’ll get back to you before the day is over</p>