Help needed!

<p>I've been working on my essay for the CommonApp, but I have no idea at all how I'm doing and if it's good or not. Can anyone help me out here? I need someone to read over it and let me know if it addresses the right topics. Any opinions at all are appreciated, actually. I just feel so lost about how to do this. Thank you!</p>

<p>I'll PM the essay to anyone who wants as long as they're '08 or older. Sorry '09ers, I like you guys but not for this situation. ;)</p>

<p>Feel free to PM me.</p>

<p>Thanks! Going to PM it to you now.</p>

<p>Anyone else willing to help out?</p>

<p>hmm.. no one else at all? ):</p>

<p>I'll try and critique it for you if you want.</p>

<p>Sure, I'll help you out :)</p>

<p>Thanks! I'm going to revise my current one according to what hpg advised me to do, so I'll send you the new one when I'm done with it. :)</p>

<p>well, I have waaay too much free time, so if you still need some help, PM me :D</p>

<p>Class of '08.</p>