<p>I've received some great feedback from this forum on my essays and was hoping that some of you could check out my intellectual vitality essay.</p>
<p>PM me and I will send it to you, but please actually provide feedback rather than just reading it. Preferably not people applying RD.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Btw, for those who don't feel like reading it, but wish to help out with the general topic, I wrote about my internet business, and how my interest in that field developed from a young age. Is that a suitable topic?</p>