Is anybody free to critique my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>If anybody has time, I would love if you could comment on my essay.
All critiques are welcomed (both good and bad)!</p>

<p>Thank you all! =D</p>

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<p>i’ll check it out :]</p>

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<p>I’l read it</p>

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<p>I would love to read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read, PM me</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>pm me if you will thanks.</p>

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<p>anyone also willing to read mine? I already had it read by another wonderful user, but I would love a second opinion before I submit it. thanks!</p>

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<p>Thank you all!
I’ll start to PM people! =D</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to read your essay</p>

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<p>ill read it np</p>