<p>I do not know if I chose an adequate topic, but 250 words do not let much room for developing my thoughts.</p>
<p>i'll help just PM what you have! I already sent in my app, by the by.</p>
<p>You can do it! The point of having such a short essay to test your writing skills- see how concise you can be in getting your point across. You will do a lot of that at Colgate. Try changing your sentences into active voice instead of passive (drop the "helping" verbs and conjunctions).</p>
<p>You can PM me if you like.
250 words really aren't many.</p>