<p>Hi guys,
I've written my supplement and would like your help to improve it.
In fact, based on the number of words ; I've written much more about what distinguishes Princeton's school of engineering than why I loved engineering my interest and experience(around 3 : 2 ratio)
Is this okay, or should I elaborate more on why engineering and cut from why princeton ?</p>
<p>Thank you for the help !</p>
<p>Mine is opposite. Not a big deal either way… they’re just trying to make sure you’re not trying to use engineering as a means to get in then drop engineering once you get there, if you can communicate that then you’re fine. It’s just a plus if this essay helps build your application in anyway though.</p>
<p>“Why Princeton” is fine as long as it refers to the engineering opportunities at Princeton specfically. “Why Princeton” as in “I want to go to Princeton because of X, Y, Z unrelated reasons” is not acceptable. They don’t track interest. They don’t really bend over backwards to admit people whose first choice is Princeton to be their students… whereas some schools deeply care about yield and rewarding those who frequently visit/contact admissions/apply binding ED (which Princeton refuses to instate), Princeton simply doesn’t.</p>