is it possible to write about my mother on prompt #1?

I am planning to write an essay about my mother, about her own company’s bankruptcy and that hard time which I and my family has undergone. The reason I really want to share that story is because that tough time really help the shape myself as I am today. But I am afraid that writing about my mother will go off the topic of prompt #1. Anyone has any advices? All help appreciated!

Your mother’s not applying to college; YOU are. Make sure it’s more about you than her.

The struggling parent (or grandparent) is one of the most cliché topics you can choose. I agree that you should look for a topic that is about you, not about somebody else. This is especially the case if it’s off-topic.

thank you guys so much @bodangles @Hunt Do you have any recommendation if I still stick to that topic but I focus on me, about how I perceived and about my view on that story. Because the only story which i find worth sharing is that story to be honest. That time is really hard but worth remembering :frowning:

If you can write about what YOU experienced and the impact it had on YOU, then it can be a good topic. (I don’t know what prompt you’re referring to, so I don’t know if it’s really on topic, though).

Writing a draft of this topic to try it out is a good idea. You can always write another one if it doesn’t work out.

Definitely make yourself the focus, especially how the event changed you or shaped you as a person. Why is that experience so important to you, even now? How are you different because of it?

@Hunt I am referring to the prompt #1. OMG thank you two :((( that’s so nice of you to enthusiastically reply me. How’s your application procedure going? or are you living a college life?

Keep in mind: the purpose behind this essay is to give them a reason to say yes to your application. The vast majority of your 650 words should be spent with that in mind-- keep the background story to the barest minimum you can manage.

Not mom. Not your family. But you. You need to be the focus of this essay-- how those circumstances have effected you, how you’ve grown, how you’re a better candidate now than you would have otherwise been.