<p>Would someone be willing to read over my essay (this one's 500 words...well, 531) and tell me if it's okay? i'd especially like to have some older readers' (in college or beyond) opinions.
Please respond and i'll be happy to pm or email the essay. Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>email it to me, i'd be happy to read it.
<a href="mailto:lisa.huynh@gmail.com">lisa.huynh@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>pm me. i'll read/comment on your essay, though i'm not an older person...</p>
<p>i would be happy to read/comment. pm me</p>
<p>i'll read it, PM</p>
<p>ill read it ok...</p>