Is my essay too bland?

<p>The prompt that I chose is "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?"</p>

<p>I wonder if anyone is willing to read it– I wrote about the Minnesota Zoo. Message me if you are interested!</p>

<p>Hi! I’d be interested in reading :)</p>

<p>If you have to ask the question, then maybe your essay is too generic. You might want to read this thread, especially: <a href=“Pitfalls or Traps in the new Common Application essay - College Essays - College Confidential Forums”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1526461-pitfalls-or-traps-in-the-new-common-application-essay.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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