<p>I finally came up with a topic for my common app. essay ( a little late, I know) and I just wanted to get some feedback to make sure that this topic was good enough. I plan to write about my experiences playing guitar-focusing on my first guitar specifically. I'll write about how I struggled to play well but persevered, how I've performed with it, how playing guitar got me involved in high school, and how I am now fairly skilled at guitar. Is this okay? Please be honest. Thanks!</p>