<p>I'm writing about my grandma teaching me how to draw</p>
<p>some one please answer I really need some feedback. Message me if you want to read the whole essay.</p>
<p>Any topic has potential, but I would need to read the whole essay to see how it works. Feel free to PM me the essay I will get back to you.</p>
<p>okay thank you!</p>
<p>Sounds like it has the makings of a great essay. Now for the hard part . . .</p>
<p>I would say it depends on how you develop the idea. I would suggest you to talk more about yourself and refrain from talking too much about your grandma since it is easy to slip if you’re not careful.</p>