<p>Hi!
For common app essay, I'm writing about my experience as a 16-year-old practicing to ride bicycle?
But through that, I draw my own philosophy of the world.
Would the disclosure of me 16-year-old but still didn't know how to ride the bicycle ridiculous?</p>
<p>Could be good, as long as it shows the reader who you are in a way that you come across as likable and/or having good character. Also, of course it needs to be written well.</p>
<p>Isn’t that part of the charm of the story?</p>
<p>FYI: I’m 17 and still don’t know how to ride a bicycle. You aren’t alone.</p>