Is this Application essay doable?

<p>In an essay of 300 words or less, choose one extracurricular activity, work experience, or community service project from the list you provided on the application and explain why you initially chose it, why you continued with it, and how you benefited from it.</p>

<p>So I have been writing down a bunch of different possible essays for this topic. I have one that I think is the most meaningful but I'm questioning if it would work as a good application essay for the topic above. If anyone could look over it and tell me if it is doable as an application essay I would appreciate it a lot. If it will work, critiquing and correcting it would also be extremely helpful. Don't be afraid to tell the truth. If you're are willing to do this, post below me and I will pm you my (very) rough draft of the essay.</p>

<p>Thank you</p>

<p>we can trade.. i have a VERY rough draft of the first paragraph of my essay, if youre interested.</p>

<p>Yeah that sounds good. I'd be happy to help out as well.</p>

<p>You can email me your essay at <a href="mailto:marshall.lawler@gmail.com">marshall.lawler@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>Where should I send mine?</p>