Application essay help

Applying to College
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<p>hi, I've just finished a second draft of my application essay (free topic) and looking for a second/third opinion. I tried asking my friends but they just gave me the typical "its all good" response. since many people on this board seems to understand the application process alot mroe than I do, I want to ask if anyone can take a moment to read my essay and give me some feed backs. PM me or post here if you are interested to help me out, and thanks in advance.</p>

<p>ps. I'm not very confident about my writting because I'm mainly a science student and english has been my second language. so any form of advice would be greatly appreciated.</p>

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<p>you can PM me.</p>

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<p>same here. I'm writing a free topic as well.</p>

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<p><em>bump</em> (10 char)</p>

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<p>I'd love to help. It annoys me too, when all I hear is, "it's good." I want critcism and specific responses! Just PM me if you still need the help.</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to help you out.</p>

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<p>thanks (10 char)</p>

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<p>ok finished my first draft couple weeks ago and edited a second one, now I have same essay with 2 different intros and still needing some feedbacks.. anyone?</p>

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<p>pm meeeeeeeeeeeee</p>

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<p>sure...I still have your other essay</p>