I don’t want to put my Ds entire essay here, but it’s for a LAC. The prompt is not terribly serious. The essay is humorous and unique. The last line basically asks to be admitted but in relevant context and should come across as a lighthearted joke. Is this acceptable or too risky? Will it come across as pandering?
Context matters, but I would omit it in any case.
she’s changing it. It has to rhyme so it was challenging but I think she has something that will work.