<p>I plan on applying to Yale, and have just completed my supplement essay. It's still too long, but I would like some honest opinions. I've kind of gone out on a limb and taken a risk on it. Would some one please read it, and provide some feedback? Is it worth the risk?</p>
<p>Preferably not high school students as well. Adults, or college students would be appreciated, especially those with experience with such selective schools</p>