<p>I wrote a short story (probably 10 pages) to try and qualify for a scholarship. The story could be about anything, as long as it was an original fiction. Would anyone like to read it and give me feed back? I would really appreciate it. I haven't let anyone else read it because I am REALLY shy when it comes to lettingn people read me "work" even though I am super outgoing the rest of the time.</p>
<p>I will totally understand if it is too long..I mean, 10 pages!...but I would seriously love you if you could comment on it. But please don't copy it or whatever. That's just...........argh!</p>