<p>I had a thread on my essay, but I want to start another one.
I was deferred from Chicago and I really thought I would get in.
I need to make this essay (Africa) top notch now for the ivies, which I am working on making my application a lot better. </p>
<p>Any takers please :)?</p>
<p>if u want me to read it i can</p>
<p>ok i can make some review, but merithorical only, i.e. what kind of person you appear to be :)</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it
pm me</p>
<p>thanks guys! any grammar geeks that would love to look closely at that aspect?</p>
<p>bumpppp! its quite changed now!</p>
<p>I’m not really a grammar fan but more of a structural feedback person. pm if you want that type of feedback</p>
<p>i’ll take a look… not a grammer geek but im good in grammer</p>
<p>Hey … can you resend me your essay? I deleted it by mistake … thanks!!</p>
<p>i want to take a look</p>
<p>bump for the last time</p>
<p>Sure send it. I’m 09, but not applying to any Ivy’s.</p>
<p>me .</p>