Just had my essay read by 3 college reps. Also looking for people to read my essay

College Essays
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<p>First of all I would like to thank wayward_trojan for helping with my essay!</p>

<p>I went to a College Application Essay Night at my school and had my essay read by three colleges in Washington State. I am planning to go to the University of Washington-Seattle and had them read my common application essay for UW.</p>

<p>They all gave me pretty much the exact same advice, which was nice to see.</p>

<p>Western Washington University: laughed in the middle and said it was a very good essay. Only suggested to move a section from my essay to the end in order to improve the flow of the essay.</p>

<p>University of Washington- Bothell: more serious while reading the essay but in the end he said it was a very good essay and gave the same suggestion as the admissions rep from WWU, to move a section of my essay to the end to improve flow. He also suggested to include something at the end of my essay that says that I am ready and/or excited about going to college. He said wanted to give me more suggestions but there was nothing more to give.</p>

<p>Washington State University: more serious then the other two colleges. Didn't like my flow of my essay as I jumped from time period to time period and gave the same suggestion to move a part of my essay to the end to improve flow. However, overall he said it was good.</p>

<p>If anyone wants to read my essay before I submit my application and give me some comments I would really appreciate it. </p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>i’d love to read it!
i may be going to school in washington.
the evergreen state college to be exact!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, just pm it to me. I graduated 2009 & I’m currently enrolled in University of Washington Seattle.</p>

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<p>id love to read it~</p>

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<p>I’ll read :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>ill read it too :P</p>

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<p>me too ill read it</p>

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<p>If you need another reader, I’d be glad to help.</p>

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<p>me too! PM over</p>

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<p>can u forward it to me also plz…i would be highly delighted to read and comment…</p>