<p>This is probably a time consuming task, so I really appreciate those of you who volunteer to do this. </p>
<p>I'd like you to tell me what type of person you see behind the words, and if the essay is effective in portraying someone rather than just fulfilling the essay requirement for the common app. </p>
<p>Please tell me which one does a better job. </p>
<p>Also, please no '14-ers. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>