LOOK! UPenn 217 essay!? Readers and critics appreciated :)

College Essays
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<p>Title pretty much says it all. I'm applying to colleges, and I wrote my penn supplement essay. Im mainly looking for general comments on the topic and presentation, as I'm not sure if the topic I wrote about will fly with admissions readers. So just post here and I'll PM you.</p>

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<p>Oh yeah, no 2010ers either for obvious reasons.</p>

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<p>PM me ill take a look</p>

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<p>I’ll read.</p>

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<p>PM it over, if you want! 2013er BTW.</p>

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<p>Be happy to help. PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure. Go ahead. I’ll read it. PM me</p>

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<p>PM it over. I give some good feedback.</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at it. pm it over</p>

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<p>pm me. I’ll take a look at it for you and provide feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me, I’ll give feedback!</p>

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<p>pm it to me!</p>

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<p>pm it over - will give feedback if needed</p>

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<p>PM i will also give feed back =)</p>