Looking for a little SOP advice

<p>I'm finishing up my SOP and am hoping some of you wise grad students would be willing to glance over it for me. Many of you have been through this already (and pretty successfully, I might add). If you are willing, drop me a line (CC PM or email: lamodica_308 AT yahoo DOT com) and I'll send it to you. I don't want to clog up valuable post space with my long-windedness. For reference, it's for history MA programs. Thanks in advance!</p>