Looking for constructive criticism on my UC essays..

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of California - Los Angeles
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<p>Any takers? I would love to have some constructive criticism/feedback on my three UC essays. I'm trying to decide whether I should scrap them and start anew because I'm dissatisfied with them, so feedback would be GREAT!</p>

<p>P.S: If you give me feedback on my essays, of course I would love to return the favor to you to make it fair.</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

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<p>Go ahead and PM me. </p>

<p>I think I can help with polishing up your UC essay and you don't have to return the favor.</p>

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<p>You can PM me as well.</p>

<p>I currently go to UCLA, and I think I could help quite a bit.</p>

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<p>Good idea...I should have done this when I applied...</p>

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<p>pm me.............</p>

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<p>PM me! I was peer pressued to do so.</p>

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<p>I would be glad to read them. I'm starting my freshman year at ucla :)</p>