Looking for constructive criticism on my UC essays..

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of California - Berkeley
1

<p>Any takers? I would love to have some constructive criticism/feedback on my three UC essays. I'm trying to decide whether I should scrap them and start anew because I'm dissatisfied with them, so feedback would be GREAT!</p>

<p>P.S: If you give me feedback on my essays, of course I would love to return the favor to you to make it fair.</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

2

<p>I'll do it. It's going to be a break from reading those boring articles for ESPM 50.</p>

3

<p>you can send them to me. i will send you a private message with my email.</p>

4

<p>I'll give you advice too! The more the better. Sending a private message would be the best way.</p>