Help me cut down my common app essay please

<p>My essay is currently 822 words. I need help cutting it down. Anyone willing to let me PM it to them and help me shorten it?</p>

<p>Also, I need help with wrapping it up.</p>

<p>No 2014er or newbies please.</p>

<p>Ugh, and I need my short answer cut by 20 words too. Someone, please help!</p>

<p>is 800 words too much? my personal essay is around 900 words… anyone know?</p>

<p>Idk, from other threads I’ve read, the general consensus seems to be about 700.</p>

<p>Bump!</p>

<p>please someone, I’m desperate for help.</p>