May someone please revise or go over my Rutgers University essay?

College Essays
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<p>I would really appreciate it :). I want to get into the New Brunswick campus quite a bit. I will private message it to any one who would want to review it. Thanks a lot in advance!</p>

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<p>anyone?? pleeaasee</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me anytime.</p>