Mentioning a Specific Place in College Essay?

I am in the middle of writing my rough drafts for the Common App essay; I decided to answer prompt #1. I am writing about a disorder that I have, and how my condition has impacted my future goals and plans. Throughout my childhood (and even now) I go to a children’s hospital for my appointments. The children’s hospital and my condition have affected my life in a big way. Is it okay to mention the hospital by name in my essay? Can I talk about how going to this hospital for my condition has inspired me to work at this children’s hospital when I grow up? I’m planning on talking more about the positive effects the condition has had on me, not solely about the actual condition itself. Thanks for all the help! :slight_smile:

Sure. You can use names (though people usually use first names only), dates, places, products, etc., since it’s a story about your actual life and you aren’t disclosing anything private / personal.

I don’t see how writing about a specific place would be a bad idea. If including it will help you tell more about yourself, then go for it.

If you say “St. Judes” or “Betty Ford” or “Mayo Clinic”, I have an immediate idea of what you’re talking about. It saves you a lot of words of explanation, words that you can use to showcase what the essay should be about: you.