<p>I was just wondering what a better introduction would be; starting with a metaphor and then extend it or use an anecdote? Some people who have read my essay say that my metaphor is very unique and intriguing, while others say that an anecdote will be more powerful. I really like my essay, but some of my critics are notable lawyers and some students majoring in english, so i think they know what they are talking about. What should i do?</p>
<p>Use whatever allows your essay, in your own judgment, to be the most personal, detailed, honest and revealing.</p>
<p>Anecdotes. No one gives a crap about what you compare your life to. Talk about your life as you. (poorly worded)</p>
<p>Use whichever essay you think YOU like and feel tells the most about who YOU are. English majors and lawyers are not necessarily experts on college entrance essays, even if they are great writers in general. Read your metaphor essay and then write down every bit of personal information that a reader who has never met you could glean from it. The reader should be able to describe who you are, what type or personality you have, and at least one other tidbit about your personal life. If the metaphor essay doesn't do that, try the anecdotal essay. In any case, you are the one who has to live with what you put on your college applications- sometimes you just have to go with your gut. Good luck.</p>
<p>alright thanks a lot</p>