MIT Essay. Max 250 words. I need to cut about 50! Help please!

<p>Hey I need help cutting down an essay I wrote for MIT, the prompt is: </p>

<p>Tell us about the most significant challenge you've faced or something important that didn't go according to plan. How did you manage the situation?</p>

<p>Its 320 words, I need it down to 275 at the least. I Wrote about losing my mother and moving to the United States, but i did it by reducing my 700 word common app essay down to 320 words. Yet I might have butchered it in the process. But at his point in the game, all I need is for this essay to atleast fit the specifications, and be clear about my situation as I did not explain it on other pats of my application. </p>

<p>Any potential readers and edit-ers (editors) for a short essay? I would really like to have this done by tonight. :) Thanks CC for your help!</p>

<p>Hey guys I could really use some help please</p>

<p>I just need general critiquing mostly now, I’m down to 301 words, I need 275 words tops. Please PM me and i will email you, thanks again!</p>